My House
| My house at the age of 7 | My house at the age of 16 |
| Everything felt big Dad and Sis was here Excitement of a new house Toys = Fun Colour = Vibrate, colourful Sound = Tv, laughter, sister playing guitar/piano, kitchen utensil when mum cooks Smell = air freshioner lavender New Furniture introduced like a foreign student entering a brand new welcoming school Furniture gleaming Sister chasing me, dad pranking me. Weather Every morning, the excitement of watching spongebob Atmosphere Hue | Everything feels small Me and mum left, rasping voice of my mum Disappointment of house, ungrated full when comparing. Hw = Stress Toys = feel like Andy like toy story. Dim colours Sound = Empty, Silence Smell = mixture of deoderant and stench of unwashed clothes lying helplessly on the floor. Furniture now looks bored and old sick of each other. Furniture rusty/dusty Accompanied by the articificial voice of my phone. Every morning, depressed comparing my life to those on insta. Weather Titanic and Iceberg Atmosphere Hue |
Language Techniques
| Language Technique | Example |
| Alliteration | |
| Assonance | |
| Onomatopoeia | |
| Repetition | |
| Parallel construction | |
| Simile | |
| Metaphor | |
| Personification | |
| Pun | |
| Symbolism | |
| Contrast | |
| Hyperbole | |
| Simple sentence | |
| Compound sentence | |
| Complex sentence | |
| Rhetorical question | |
| Listing |
Order
| Order | Before | After |
| Sound | Tv, laughter, sister playing guitar/piano, kitchen utensil when mum cooks | Silenced, only had the aritcial sound of my phone to accompany me like it was non digetic sound added in a film. |
| People | Mum, Dad and Sis comforting me like bubble wrap protecting something | The bubble wrap had popped. |
| Relationship | My heart, Titanic, the departure of my father, the iceberg | |
| Emotion | Love and stuff | Emptiness, a missing jigsaw peice in my heart |
| Hue | Vibrant | Black and White, Ying and yang |
| Size | Big, | Small, Outgrown |
| Furniture | New furniture gleamed, excited to meet their new class mates for life. | Furniture looks bored and sick of each other |
| Lights were broken, didnt even have the gleam of my fathers smile upon me. |