Creative Writing Plan

My House

My house at the age of 7My house at the age of 16
Everything felt big
Dad and Sis was here
Excitement of a new house
Toys = Fun
Colour = Vibrate, colourful
Sound = Tv, laughter, sister playing guitar/piano, kitchen utensil when mum cooks
Smell = air freshioner lavender
New Furniture introduced like a foreign student entering a brand new welcoming school
Furniture gleaming
Sister chasing me, dad pranking me. 
Weather
Every morning, the excitement of watching spongebob
Atmosphere
Hue



Everything feels small
Me and mum left, rasping voice of my mum
Disappointment of house, ungrated full when comparing. 
Hw = Stress
Toys = feel like Andy like toy story. 
Dim colours
Sound = Empty, Silence 
Smell = mixture of deoderant and stench of unwashed clothes lying helplessly on the floor. 
Furniture now looks bored and old sick of each other. 
Furniture rusty/dusty 
Accompanied by the articificial voice of my phone. 
Every morning, depressed comparing my life to those on insta. 
Weather
Titanic and Iceberg
Atmosphere
Hue

Language Techniques 

Language TechniqueExample
Alliteration
Assonance
Onomatopoeia
Repetition
Parallel construction
Simile
Metaphor
Personification
Pun
Symbolism
Contrast
Hyperbole
Simple sentence
Compound sentence
Complex sentence
Rhetorical question
Listing 

Order

OrderBeforeAfter
Sound
Tv, laughter, sister playing guitar/piano, kitchen utensil when mum cooks
Silenced, only had the aritcial sound of my phone to accompany me like it was non digetic sound added in a film. 
PeopleMum, Dad and Sis comforting me like bubble wrap protecting somethingThe bubble wrap had popped. 
RelationshipMy heart, Titanic, the departure of my father, the iceberg
EmotionLove and stuffEmptiness, a missing jigsaw peice in my heart
HueVibrantBlack and White, Ying and yang
SizeBig, Small, Outgrown
FurnitureNew furniture gleamed, excited to meet their new class mates for life. Furniture looks bored and sick of each other
Lights were broken, didnt even have the gleam of my fathers smile upon me. 

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